13. Avoid the Comma Splice in Run-on Sentences

In the last post, we learned about avoiding the run-on sentence. A run-on sentence happens when we run two complete thoughts together. It is important to keep each thought separate from another.

Sometimes we think that we can avoid a run-on by putting a comma between the two thoughts, but a comma is not stop punctuation. A comma between two complete thoughts is called a comma splice.

Comma splice example: I’m hungry, let’s go eat.

I’m hungry is one complete thought. Let’s go eat is another complete thought.

Two complete thoughts cannot be joined with just a comma. Use stop punctuation to separate two complete thoughts: a period, comma, FANBOYS, or a semicolon.

1. Use a period. I’m hungry. Let’s go eat.

2. Use a comma with one of the FANBOYS. I’m hungry, so let’s go eat.

3. Use a semicolon. I’m hungry; let’s go eat.

Never use a comma alone to separate two complete thoughts in a sentence. If you use a comma, be sure to use comma, FANBOYS.

  • Now you try it. Use one of the ideas above to fix this comma splice. It’s Mom’s birthday, I baked a cake.